Good style. Let down by a poor sense of humour
Let me say something before my regular tirade. You have a fantastic drawing style. The guy in the wheelchair and your main protagonist look fantastic.
But it's let down by the juvinile humour I've come to loathe and detest. Random deaths that are pretty much only a red stain on the landscape (no well drawn body parts? Forshame), and the fact that it was too short to get into made me turn completely against it.